I wish it was your arms
entwined within my body
I wish it was your scent
that tantalize my senses
I wish it was your breath
that warmth me all over
I wish it was your kiss
that quench my longing
I wish it was you
that completes my existence
but there's no you
just a wind passing by
to remind me of a passing fancy
PS: Done 8-4-08 11:05pm while I was just thinking of things and the idea formulate so here's the outcome wrote this less than 5 minutes hehehe if im inspire its that fast to write a poem...lol I hope you like it and do leave a comment what you think thanks...
10 comments:
nice poem gurl... really like it...
thanks gurl ghapon lang cya ako nahimo kay nagmoni2x man
what ur wishing for:
gatorade - thirst quencher
rexona - wont let you down
coke - no sugar
lols :) keep writing
i sikwate hahaha bitaws naa rana sa nagread kun unsa ilang paminaw akong wish hehehe bitaw louie thanks for dropping by my page :-)
gurl i have a tag for you.. hope u will grab it thank u gurl hehehe
thanks gurl finish na answering your tag dugay ko ka response tungod sa ka busy ghapon naa pajud c bossing...tc gurl
Ahhh,,
the bittersweet of longing...
the disappoinment in hope,
the ilusiveness of Love,
All that which keeps us alive, still.
Nice post ads..
Keep the desper/inspiration.
:=)
ahooy bryce ana jud ng life...nice comment pud hehehe cge ato lang keep the fire of love burning...we'll surely get there in no time...kaw pud gudluck sa imong mga kuan dha hehehe
I wish it was ur finger logodize my bugan....
I wish it was ur tounge kupay my borit..
P.S.
dedicated to loydo
sogo ni bryce
hehehe unya loydo dogie labrador retrievr sa man imong tubag sa comment nila hehehe
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